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Choose the company\'s growth and success.

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In what ways do you see yourself contributing to the company's growth and success?

I think that it would be good to contribute to the growth of the company.
If the company succeeds, the salary will increase and it is good, but the process of achieving the results and people think it is more important.
If the company runs with the goal of success, it's like a sand castle that's about to collapse.
Teamwork can't be expected and people will feel lonely. And there will be jealous situations of each other and more cases of moving to other companies.
Also, I think teamwork is important. Because we all go together without anyone being left behind.
If you create teamwork and carry our the process hard, I think the company's success will naturally follow as the company grows.

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Hi, Yun! Thanks for completing this. I am always impressed with your writing skills. Writing in English is certainly your forte. Good job! See you in our next class!
~T. Jade^^
In what ways do you see yourself contributing to the company's growth and success?
I think that it would be good to contribute to the growth of the company.
>> Correct
If the company succeeds, the salary will increase and it is good, but the process of achieving the results and people think it is more important.
>> Correct
>> OR: While a salary increase is a positive outcome of the company's success, many consider the process of achieving results and the well-being of the people involved to be more important.
If the company runs with the goal of success, it's like a sand castle that's about to collapse.
>> Correct
>> OR: If the company pursues success at any cost, it's like a fragile sandcastle.
Teamwork can't be expected and people will feel lonely. 
>> Correct
And there will be jealous situations of each other and more cases of moving to other companies.
>> And there will be jealous situations with each other and more cases of employees moving to other companies.
Also, I think teamwork is important. 
>> Correct
Because we all go together without anyone being left behind.
>> Correct
If you create teamwork and carry our the process hard, I think the company's success will naturally follow as the company grows.
>> If you create teamwork and carry out the process well, I think the company's success will naturally follow as it grows.
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