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What do you do when you hear your name pop up in other people¡¯s conversations?

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when they talk behind my back I will feel bad. And maybe when they are my best friends or my precious people, I¡¯m so upset about them.
but i will listening their talk quietly. Because just i wonder their talk about me What or why They have been upset to me.

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Hi Su,

I want to commend you for completing your homework with such dedication. Your effort truly shines through, and I'm so proud of your commitment to improving your English skills. I also wanted to take a moment to address the feelings you've shared in your homework. It's natural to feel hurt when people talk behind your back, especially if they're your closest friends or loved ones. Your willingness to listen and understand their perspective shows great maturity and empathy. Remember, communication is key, and sometimes talking to them about your feelings can help resolve misunderstandings. You're a thoughtful and caring individual, and I believe that your willingness to understand others will serve you well in life. Keep up the fantastic work, both in your English studies and in your relationships with others. See you later. ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

when they talk behind my back I will feel bad.

>>If they talk behind my back, I will feel bad.

And maybe when they are my best friends or my precious people, I¡¯m so upset about them.

>>And maybe if they were my best friends or the ones I care about, I would feel really upset about them.

but i will listening their talk quietly.

>>But I will listen to their talk quietly.

Because just i wonder their talk about me What or why They have been upset to me.

>>Because I would wonder what they¡¯re saying about me and why they¡¯ve been upset.

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