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How similar or different are you from your siblings?

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First, the similar things from my sibling are our appearances,characteristics and a developmental organ. We are introverted and we don't like to go to outside. Also, we have sensitive ears. But the difference from my sibling is our aptitudes. My sibling is good at art, math and science but I am good at Korean and English.

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Hi, Daisy. Thank you so much for doing your homework and for doing a great job in answering your homework. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
First, the similar things from my sibling are our appearances,characteristics and a developmental organ.
>> First, the things my sibling and I have in common are our appearances, characteristics, and a developmental organ.
We are introverted, and we don't like to go to outside. 
>> Correct
Also, we have sensitive ears.
>> Correct
But the difference from my sibling is our aptitudes.
>> Correct
My sibling is good at art, math and science but I am good at Korean and English.
>> Correct
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