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I'm interested in the security in my country. I believe South Korea is the safest country in the world. You can hang out with your friends until late at night. And when you left your belongings somewhere, you can find it easily. Otherwise, you can't remember where it is. Also, people in South Korea are very kind who could help you even they're not fluently in English. :)

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I'm interested in the security in my country. 
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I believe South Korea is the safest country in the world. 
>> Correct
You can hang out with your friends until late at night. 
>> Correct
And when you left your belongings somewhere, you can find it easily. 
>> And when you leave your belongings somewhere, you can find it easily.  
Otherwise, you can't remember where it is. 
>> Correct
Also, people in South Korea are very kind who could help you even they're not fluently in English. :)
>> Also, people in South Korea are very kind and can help you even if they're not fluent in English. :)
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