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In my opinion, the most difficult thing in the world is not to take familiarity for granted. Because the moment I take familiarity for granted, I will stop considering it important.

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Hi Young Taek!
I would love to hear more from you during class.
Your opinion is very interesting to me.
Make sure not to start your sentences with conjunctions when they are supposed to be connected to the previous sentence.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In my opinion, the most difficult thing in the world is not to take familiarity for granted.
>> Correct
 Because the moment I take familiarity for granted, I will stop considering it important.
>> It's because the moment I take familiarity for granted, I will stop considering it important.
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