¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What are the best ways to keep yourself fit?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*°æ
2023-08-31 1373

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

First of all, we need to be careful about what and how much to eat to get in shape. If possible, we should have an organic food and vegetable-based diet with moderate amounts of food every meal. I think we need to shell out for a healthy diet to make sure that we can live a long and healthy life. That's because our average life expectancy is about 100 years old.

Also, we need to work out on a regular basis. On top of that, we try to secure enough time for sleep every day and abstain from any behaviors to hamper your sound sleep, such as eating something within 4 hours before you sleep, because sound sleep is an essential part of your healthy life.

Besides, we need to be careful about not only physical health but also mental health to keep us fit. That¡¯s because many physical illnesses have something to do with mental disorders and vice versa. For example, we sometimes feel lethargic from mental problems and don't have the physical strength to do it.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi, Steve!

Thank you for answering your homework!

Here are some things to take note of:

1. First of all, we need to be careful about what and how much to eat to get in shape. 
>>CORRECT!

2. If possible, we should have an organic food and vegetable-based diet with moderate amounts of food every meal. 
>>If possible, we should have organic food and vegetable-based diet in moderate amounts in every meal. 

3. I think we need to shell out for a healthy diet to make sure that we can live a long and healthy life. 
>>CORRECT!

4. That's because our average life expectancy is about 100 years old.
>>The reason is that our average life expectancy is only about 100 years old.

5. Also, we need to work out on a regular basis. 
>>CORRECT!

6. On top of that, we try to secure enough time for sleep every day and abstain from any behaviors to hamper your sound sleep, such as eating something within 4 hours before you sleep, because sound sleep is an essential part of your healthy life.
>>On top of that, we need to secure enough time for sleep every day and abstain from any behavior that hampers our sound sleep, such as eating something within 4 hours before sleeping. Sound sleep is an essential part of a healthy life.

7. Besides, we need to be careful about not only physical health but also mental health to keep us fit. 
>>Additionally, we need to be careful about not only our physical health but also our mental health to keep us fit.

8. That¡¯s because many physical illnesses have something to do with mental disorders and vice versa. 
>>Many physical illnesses have something to do with mental disorders and vice versa.

9. For example, we sometimes feel lethargic from mental problems and don't have the physical strength to do it.
>>For example, we sometimes feel lethargic because of our mental problems and don't have the physical strength to do things.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
133728 ±è*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1088
133727 homework ÀÌ*¼÷ ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 868
133726 homework °ø*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1179
133725 HAHAHA- My homework\'s late! ;) À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1271
133724 I think it\'s safe to think alone and avoid topics that can be... À±*Çý ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 989
133723 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1359
133722 HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \\\\ ¾Ù* ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 3
133721 What is the most difficult part of studying English? ±Ç*ÀÓ ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1
133720 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1141
133719 Homework ½Å*È­ ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 979
133718 Do you think people have a natural tendency to dislike Mondays?... ¿¡*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1
133717 Do you like reading books? What book do you like the... ¹Ú*Çö ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1566
133716 What are the advantages and disadvantages of being alone? Àü*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1
133715 Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 702
133714 Describe a sunset to someone who cannot see it. Á¤*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1470
133713 What is your opinion about a four-day week? Á¤*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1173
133712 What do you think the world will be like if all people speak... ÃÖ*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 2245
133711 Lent my AirPods to my brother ¹Ú*À² ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1103
133710 The importance of working out ÀÓ*Áø ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 1874
133709 Homework À±*¼± ¿Ï·á 2024-01-08 988

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04