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If I apologize to my ex

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2023-08-30 1885

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If I apologized to my ex, it would be about my attitude. Even though she did not treat me nicely, I should be nice to her if I really liked or loved her. Now I think I was not that good to her. I was the same as her. So I want to say sorry about that even if she did not feel sorry or any guilty to me because I am an educated and maturing person.

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Hello again, Thomas!

Unfortunately, this may never happen but then worth self reflecting since loving and braking up is a double edged sword. If you think you could have done better, these are points to improve in your part hoping that you will not make the same mistakes again in the future.

Congratulations for getting all sentences correctly! When you talk about relationship, your grammar is accurate. Keep writing, great job!

Take care today.

-T. Donna~

If I apologized to my ex, it would be about my attitude. 
>> Correct!

Even though she did not treat me nicely, I should be nice to her if I really liked or loved her. 
>> Correct!

Now I think I was not that good to her. I was the same as her. 
>> Correct!

So I want to say sorry about that even if she did not feel sorry or any guilty to me because I am an educated and maturing person.
>> Correct! Very good sentence!
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