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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the most confusing language in the world?

There are many kinds of languages in the world.
It differents form person by person, but there are languages are easy to feel and
difficult to learn.
Among the languages, I feel Arabic is the most confusing.
Except for Arabic, I can find word and alphabets in the other languages sentence.
However, I can't do it in Arabic sentence.
I'm not discriminating Arabic.
But, when I look around Arabic sentence, it feels like a snake is coming out in a sentence.
And also I feel Arabic sentences feel like someone is dozing off.
In short, there are many special languages in the world.
And, I feel Arabic seems the hardest.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What is the most confusing language in the world?


There are many kinds of languages in the world.
>> CORRECT!
It differents form person by person, but there are languages are easy to feel and
difficult to learn.
>> It's different from person to person, but there are languages that are easy to feel and
difficult to learn.
Among the languages, I feel Arabic is the most confusing.
>> CORRECT!
Except for Arabic, I can find word and alphabets in the other languages sentence.
>> Except for Arabic, I can find words and alphabets in the other languages, or even sentences.
However, I can't do it in Arabic sentence.
>> However, I can't do it in Arabic sentences.
I'm not discriminating Arabic.
>> I'm not discriminating Arabs.
But, when I look around Arabic sentence, it feels like a snake is coming out in a sentence.
>> But, when I look at Arabic sentences, it feels like a snake is going to come out of it.
And also I feel Arabic sentences feel like someone is dozing off.
>> Also, I feel like Arabic sentences would make someone doze off.
In short, there are many special languages in the world.
>> CORRECT!
And, I feel Arabic seems the hardest.
>> CORRECT!
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