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What I will do if I see her

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As you know when I see her what I will do. It has already been happened. I met her and I did not talk to her and pretended to enjoy that party and was okay. I think I wanted to have a fun with her but I couldn't do that because I knew If I had a great time with her I would be sad and lonely at home alone. I don't know my feelings. It's very complicated. I want to be free.

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Hello, Thomas!

Now that it has already happened, you have to be strong to stand for your decision. Since you took the step away from her, that means that you are no longer interested in being friends. 

Sometimes, it is too difficult to show our true feelings even if we want to be with someone. As far as the last encounter between of you occurred, it seemed that you did not have fun with her and you still felt alone at home. I guess, these things will just make you wiser and stronger. Always protect your feelings.

Congratulations for composing long and meaningful sentences! Study my suggestions well.

See you later.

-T. Donna~

As you know when I see her what I will do. It has already been happened. 
>> As you know, when I saw her what I already did. It has already happened

I met her and I did not talk to her and pretended to enjoy that party and was okay. 
>> Correct!

I think I wanted to have a fun with her but I couldn't do that because I knew If I had a great time with her I would be sad and lonely at home alone. 
>>  I think I wanted to have fun with her but I couldn't do that because I knew If I had a great time with her I would be sad and lonely at home alone. Very good sentence! 

I don't know my feelings. It's very complicated. I want to be free.
>> Correct!
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