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1. I wasn't impressed, but I have been to applied for a unique company. I have applied for the National Intelligence Service's computer part.

2. It's an organization dealing with top secrets, so I can't pinpoint the exact location. It is a direct presidential organization that collects information on national security and North Korea.

3. I admire that this company have a lot of patriotism for my counrty. I was very impressed by the mission for the country and the protection of the people based on patriotism.

4. To be honest, I think I didn't know much about this company. It's just I thought it was like the CIA in the USA, and it would be interesting like dramas and movies.

5. I think the company has dedicated to protecting the safety of the country and its people. Also, the company deeply involved in the political field.

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Good morning, Yun! Thanks for completing this. Based on your answers, I can see that you've also decided to apply for more jobs. That's wonderful! I am proud and happy to know because it is indeed recommended to apply for different options so you don't have to wait on just one. Also, the new company you have applied to sounds awesome. I hope you get hired. Great job answering those questions. See you in our next class!
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1. I wasn't impressed, but I have been to applied for a unique company. 

>> I wasn't impressed, but I have applied for a unique company.

>> OR : I wasn't initially impressed, but I have applied to a unique company.

I have applied for the National Intelligence Service's computer part.
>> I have applied for the National Intelligence Service's computer department.
>>  OR: I have applied for a position in the National Intelligence Service's computer department.
2. It's an organization dealing with top secrets, so I can't pinpoint the exact location. 
>> Correct
>> OR: It's an organization dealing with top-secret information, so I can't pinpoint the exact location.
It is a direct presidential organization that collects information on national security and North Korea.
>> Correct
3. I admire that this company have a lot of patriotism for my counrty. 
>> I admire that this company has a lot of patriotism for my country.
I was very impressed by the mission for the country and the protection of the people based on patriotism.
>> Correct
4. To be honest, I think I didn't know much about this company. 
>> Correct
It's just I thought it was like the CIA in the USA, and it would be interesting like dramas and movies.
>> Correct
>> I just thought it was similar to the CIA in the USA, and I imagined it would be interesting, like in dramas and movies.
5. I think the company has dedicated to protecting the safety of the country and its people. 
>> I think the company is dedicated to protecting the safety of the country and its people.
Also, the company deeply involved in the political field.
>> Also, the company is deeply involved in the political field.
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