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Of course I had the experience of not having money.
When I didn't have money, I stayed at home most of the time and didn't see anyone.

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Good day, Jade!
I heard from that if you do not have money, Dress nicely, so people won't think that you don't have one. It also goes to your feeling. Is something is missing, try doing something to cover up what you don't have ^^
Aki~
Of course I had the experience of not having money.
>>> CORRECT!

When I didn't have money, I stayed at home most of the time and didn't see anyone.
>>> CORRECT!

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