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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about "What advice would you give to your sister if she would feel jealous to someone?"

I'll tell my sister not to be jealous.
It is because jealousy makes me tired.
She doesn't have to be jealous of others.

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Hi Jessica! Thank you so much for writing your homework!
I really appreciate it!
Keep it up!

-T.Nikki :) 


I'll tell my sister not to be jealous.
>> CORRECT!
It is because jealousy makes me tired.
>> It is because jealousy will just make her feel tired. 
She doesn't have to be jealous of others.
>> CORRECT! 


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