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- I applying for Korea Culture Heritage Foundation.

- The company has a foundation chairman instead of CEO. He's name Choi Young-chang. I know that he is the new chairman of entering a position, who has been in office since 2021. I don't know any other information.

- This company is conducting various projects where everyone can enjoy culture heritage and traditional culture more pleasantly.
For example, we can join in events to walk through palaces such as Gyeongbokgung Palace and Changdeokgung Palace, listen to historical explanations, and see culture heritage.

With the slogan "Share new value of culture heritage to all.", the company serves as a bridge to connect the past and the future.
Based on this, they protect and preserve Korean culture heritage, inform people, and creatively utilize the future values of traditional culture to create new values.

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Good morning, Yun! I appreciate you sharing this information. This would be very helpful for our discussion tomorrow. If you can also notice with the corrections, most of it would be from "culture heritage" to "cultural heritage. The reason for that is that the appropriate term would be "cultural heritage," which is the correct term to use because it's a more established and accurate term in English. Nonetheless, you did great on today's homework! See you in class tomorrow!
~T. Jade^^
I applying for Korea Culture Heritage Foundation.
>> I am applying for the Korea Culture Heritage Foundation.
The company has a foundation chairman instead of CEO. 
>> The company has a foundation chairman instead of a CEO.
He's name Choi Young-chang. 
>> His name is Choi Young-chang.
I know that he is the new chairman of entering a position, who has been in office since 2021. 
>> I know that he is the new chairman entering a position, and he has been in office since 2021.
>> OR: I know that he is the new chairman, who has been in office since 2021.
I don't know any other information.
>> Correct
This company is conducting various projects where everyone can enjoy culture heritage and traditional culture more pleasantly.
>> This company is conducting various projects that allow everyone to enjoy cultural heritage and traditional culture more pleasantly.
For example, we can join in events to walk through palaces such as Gyeongbokgung Palace and Changdeokgung Palace, listen to historical explanations, and see culture heritage.
>> For example, we can join events to walk through palaces such as Gyeongbokgung Palace and Changdeokgung Palace, listen to historical explanations, and see cultural heritage.
With the slogan "Share new value of culture heritage to all.", the company serves as a bridge to connect the past and the future.
>> Correct
>> OR: With the slogan "Sharing the New Value of Cultural Heritage with All," the company serves as a bridge connecting the past and the future.
Based on this, they protect and preserve Korean culture heritage, inform people, and creatively utilize the future values of traditional culture to create new values.
>>  Correct
>> OR: Based on this, they protect and preserve Korean cultural heritage, inform people, and creatively utilize the future values of traditional culture to create new value.
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