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The advantages and disadvantages of texting or sending messages

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2023-08-23 1838

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Texting or sending messages became a part of our lives to communicate with people. Compared to sending E-mails, or even letters in the past, Texting on the phone is very convenient and fast. But It cause sometimes misunderstandings because communications go not only with words but also with facial expressions gestures and intonations as well.

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Good day, Seung Ki! Nowadays, technology makes our lives more convenient. We relay our message to others faster than ever before. Texting has its advantages, but it still has its disadvantages. That is why we must be responsible when using them. ~T. Lyn
Texting or sending messages became a part of our lives to communicate with people. 
>>Texting or sending messages to communicate with people has become a part of our lives.
Compared to sending E-mails, or even letters in the past, Texting on the phone is very convenient and fast.
>>Compared to sending emails or letters in the past, sending a text over the phone is very convenient and quick.
But It cause sometimes misunderstandings because communications go not only with words but also with facial expressions gestures and intonations as well.
>>However, since communication is not only done with words, but also with facial expressions, gestures, and intonation, misunderstanding sometimes arise.
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