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There is no perfect policy or solution in education system. Hopely, the new education policy could help teacher's teaching methods. Not every teacher is always satisfied that education system. If the government do action something, probably the teachers' needs will be filled partly. We need to consider student who is remoced from the class. From that reason, the student would have lack of learning too. That matter is complicated.

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Hi, Angela!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. There is no perfect policy or solution in education system. 
>>There is no perfect policy or solution in any education system.

2. Hopely, the new education policy could help teacher's teaching methods.
>> Hopefully, the new education policy could help improve the teachers' teaching methods.

3. Not every teacher is always satisfied that education system. 
>>Not every teacher is always satisfied of the current education system.

4. If the government do action something, probably the teachers' needs will be filled partly. 
>>If the government does action on something, probably the teachers' needs will be partly filled. 

5. We need to consider student who is removed from the class.
>>We also need to consider the student who is removed from the class.

6. From that reason, the student would have lack of learning too. 
>>From that reason, the student would have lack of learning, too. 

7. That matter is complicated.
>>CORRECT!
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