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Acupuncture is common in Korea. I know that acupuncture is originated from China, but since it was introduced to Korea in the past, acupuncture has developed until now and is also called Korean traditional medicine. There are a lot of clinics in Korea, and I tried several times. When I was young, I often fell down and sprained my wrist or ankle. Every time, I went to the oriental medicine clinic and got acupuncture treatment and recovered quickly. So I think it is quite effective for pain.

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Hi, Annie!
It's nice that you find acupuncture effective. I haven't tried it yet, but I have also heard a lot of stories about its effectiveness. Also, it's a good thing that you are not scared of needles.
- T. Caitlyn
Acupuncture is common in Korea. 
>> CORRECT
I know that acupuncture is originated from China, but since it was introduced to Korea in the past, acupuncture has developed until now and is also called Korean traditional medicine. 
>> I know that acupuncture originated in China, but since it was introduced to Korea in the past, acupuncture has developed over time and is also known as Korean traditional medicine.
There are a lot of clinics in Korea, and I tried several times. 
>> There are a lot of clinics in Korea, and I have tried it several times.
When I was young, I often fell down and sprained my wrist or ankle. 
>> CORRECT
Every time, I went to the oriental medicine clinic and got acupuncture treatment and recovered quickly. 
>> CORRECT
So I think it is quite effective for pain.
>> CORRECT
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