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What makes a better impression, his/her appearance or personality? Why?

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At first impression, I think appearance can make better impression. When we meet some people at first, we have to judge him based on his appearance. We don't know his personality. So, we should take care of our appearance.

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Hi, Seon!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. At first impression, I think appearance can make better impression. 
>>At first, I think appearance can make a better impression. 

2. When we meet some people at first, we have to judge him based on his appearance. 
>>When we meet some people for the first time, we have to judge him/her based on his/her appearance. 

3. We don't know his personality. So, we should take care of our appearance.
>>We don't know his personality yet, so we should take good care of our appearance.
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