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1. acquaintance
- there are a lot of acquaintances around us
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deeper
- i really hope we are not acquaintances to
Each other
2. satisfaction
- there is no satisfaction when it comes to
Money
- i might have satisfaction if i could go on a date with her
3. inevitably
- this accident happen inevitaby. Don¡¯t push yourself.
- all beginners of company inevitably make a mistakes. Don¡¯t worry about that a lot

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1. acquaintance
>> CORRECT
- there are a lot of acquaintances around us 
But in my case i don¡¯t try to know them deeper
>> There are a lot of acquaintances around me, but I don¡¯t try to know them deeper.
- i really hope we are not acquaintances to
>> I really hope we are not acquaintances to each other.
2. satisfaction
>> CORRECT
- there is no satisfaction when it comes to 
Money
>> There is no satisfaction when it comes to money.
- i might have satisfaction if i could go on a date with her
>> I might have satisfaction if i could go on a date with her.
3. inevitably
>> CORRECT
- this accident happen inevitaby. 
>> This accident happened inevitably. 
Don¡¯t push yourself.
>> CORRECT
- all beginners of company inevitably make a mistakes. 
>> All beginners of companies inevitably make a mistake. 
OR It is an unavoidable truth that novice employees in organizations are prone to making errors.
Don¡¯t worry about that a lot
>> However, don¡¯t worry about that a lot.
OR There's no need to excessively worry about that.
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