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Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Do you think people in your country appreciates Art very much? Why do you think so?

Yes I think the people in our country think high opinion to art
because a lot of artists are very famous and very rich

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Good morning, Min Seog! As always, you were diligent in answering this homework. Let's just continue to work harder in order to improve your skills and knowledge in English even further. Keep it up! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
Yes I think the people in our country think high opinion to art
>> Yes, I think people in our country have high opinion about art. 
because a lot of artists are very famous and very rich
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