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What is your major, and why did you choose that major?

My major is Computer Engineering and Computer teaching. I took it up at Dong-Eui University in Busan.
From a young age, I have been interested in new things. I came to realize that I had to do something creative.
Ever since I was a high school student, I've always been passionate about computers and teaching.
I knew that working in computer engineering could provide me with good prospects and allow me to express myself creatively through my thinking.
After graduating from the university, I gained two years of hands-on experience in teaching junior and senior students regarding computer engineering.

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What is your major, and why did you choose that major?
My major is Computer Engineering and Computer Teaching. 
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I took it up at Dong-Eui University in Busan.
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From a young age, I have been interested in new things. 
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I came to realize that I had to do something creative.
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Ever since I was a high school student, I've always been passionate about computers and teaching.
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I knew that working in computer engineering could provide me with good prospects and allow me to express myself creatively through my thinking.
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After graduating from the university, I gained two years of hands-on experience in teaching junior and senior students regarding computer engineering.
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>> OR: After graduating from the university, I gained two years of hands-on experience in teaching junior and senior students computer engineering.

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