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I got an apology after complaining and got a refund or an exchange.
But I'm working on phone calls, but I have a bad memory, so I'm working while recording.
As a result, people say no, but when they listen to what they recorded, they apologize for it, so they fight for better service or feel worse, so they don't complain about what they can understand.

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Hello Da Hye,

Great job on completing your homework! You're really getting the hang of things. Learning has its ups and downs, but you're doing awesome. Keep it up!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I got an apology after complaining and got a refund or an exchange.

>>CORRECT

But I'm working on phone calls, but I have a bad memory, so I'm working while recording.

>>I'm working on phone calls, but I have a bad memory, so I'm recording while working.

As a result, people say no, but when they listen to what they recorded, they apologize for it, so they fight for better service or feel worse, so they don't complain about what they can understand.

>>As a result, people initially decline, but upon listening to their recordings, they apologize for their response. This leads to either advocating for improved service or feeling discouraged, causing them not to complain about something they can comprehend.

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