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How do you feel about fusion food? Do you prefer traditional Korean food than fusion ones?

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Honestly I could not choose my food preference since I have realized that every food has their own flavor. If I begin to block other exotic one because of my personal favorite taste, I will lose my opportunity to experience other countries' culture. Imagine a person who has a strong food preference and refuse to try a cuisine that the person has never tried. This person cannot grab an opportunity to expand its food catalog and ban itself to enjoy the food that will never come again. To prevent myself from this unfortunate situation, I would never stop to try every tasty food around the world. even if the cuisine is trying to combine with other traditions, it would lead to a great movement on the food history.

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Thank you for this Myeong ha! Very well said. Being a person who is very adventurous with food, I definitely support this idea of trying everything the world has to offer.

Honestly I could not choose my food preference since I have realized that every food has their own flavor. 
>>> Honestly, I could not choose my food preference since I have realized that every food has its own flavor.   
If I begin to block other exotic one because of my personal favorite taste, I will lose my opportunity to experience other countries' culture. 
>>> correct   
Imagine a person who has a strong food preference and refuse to try a cuisine that the person has never tried. 
>>>  correct 
This person cannot grab an opportunity to expand its food catalog and ban itself to enjoy the food that will never come again. 
>>This person cannot grab the opportunity to expand his/her food catalogue and lose the chance to enjoy the food that will never come again.  
To prevent myself from this unfortunate situation, I would never stop to try every tasty food around the world. 
>>>  correct  
Even if the cuisine is trying to combine with other traditions, it would lead to a great movement on the food history.
>>> OR:  Even if the cuisine is trying to combine food with other traditions, it would lead to a great evolution/innovation on the food history. 

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