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Have you ever committed a small/ petty crime when you were young?

작성자: 이*주
2023-08-21 1771

회원님의 영작문

When I saw the examples of the question, I felt guilty a little, actually.
Usually, I'm pretty sure about being a law-abiding citizen except crossing the crosswalk.
At the beginning of doing jaywalk was more than 15 years ago that I was in elementary school student on the way to school.
That time, I got wind of jaywalk is faster than takes a shortcut and it is easy to cross the crosswalk because there are not many cars.
Therefore, I made up my mind to do jaywalk.
I don't want to make an excuse for doing jaywalk until now, but the first attempt was really nailed it.

Based on that success, as I started riding a bicycle, I did not follow the signal freely.
Fortunately, I never had a car accident.
I know it is dangerous for drivers and pedestrians both sides of people, but the Korean gene has always in a hurry even the sign is stop.
Maybe it's kinds of safety frigidity.
Anyway, It's not in my New Year's resolution, but I'll try to kick the habit that I have had for a long time:)

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there, Hyeon Ju!

Since we talked about juvenile delinquency today, I thought I would ask of a question that makes us reminisce our youth as being young, wild, and free ones (YOLO mode). On a serious note, being a minor means that we can be susceptible or vulnerable to commit mistakes. For some, it can be very fatal. So, I appreciate your being honest about jaywalking.

Some youth try to shoplift in a store and do not feel any remorse about it. The others bully the weak as depicted on the K-Drama The Glory. If you have remained law-abiding at this point of your life, there is a great chance that you will be the same all throughout your life.

Here on your work, I see your mastery in vocabulary and idioms as well as your fluency. Study the underscored word or group of words to enhance your grammar even more. You did a wonderful job! Carry on!

-T. Donna~

When I saw the examples of the question, I felt guilty a little, actually.
>> Correct!

Usually, I'm pretty sure about being a law-abiding citizen except crossing the crosswalk.
>> Correct!

At the beginning of doing jaywalk was more than 15 years ago that I was in elementary school student on the way to school.
>> At the beginning of doing jaywalk was more than 15 years ago when I was an elementary school student on the way to school.

That time, I got wind of jaywalk is faster than takes a shortcut and it is easy to cross the crosswalk because there are not many cars.
>>   That time, I (got wind/ acquainted/ at home with) of jaywalking as it is faster than taking a shortcut and it is easy to cross the crosswalk because there are not many cars.

Therefore, I made up my mind to do jaywalk.
>> Correct!
Or: Therefore, I made up my mind to jaywalk.

I don't want to make an excuse for doing jaywalk until now, but the first attempt was really nailed it.
>> I don't want to make an excuse for doing jaywalking until now, but on the first attempt, I really nailed it.

Based on that success, as I started riding a bicycle, I did not follow the signal freely.
>> Correct!

Fortunately, I never had a car accident.
>> Correct!

I know it is dangerous for drivers and pedestrians both sides of people, but the Korean gene has always in a hurry even the sign is stop.
>> I know it is dangerous for drivers and pedestrians both sides of people, but the Korean gene is always in a hurry even the sign is stop.

Maybe it's kinds of safety frigidity.
>> Maybe it's a kind of safety frigidity.

Anyway, It's not in my New Year's resolution, but I'll try to kick the habit that I have had for a long time:)
>>  Correct!
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