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The first of the three things you need to travel is a smartphone.
This is because there are many uses such as storing travel schedules, information, tickets, etc. on a smartphone, and taking and storing photos.
Second is fashion.
It's because I feel better when I wear the style I'm attracted to every day and take pictures according to the concept.
Finally free.
This is because if there is no leisure, travel can become stressful because it is driven by purpose rather than pleasure.

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Happy Monday Eliana!
We all have different views on what to bring when we travel. I love the way you twisted my expectation. Carry on!
Aki~


The first of the three things you need to travel is a smartphone.
>>> CORRECT!

This is because there are many uses such as storing travel schedules, information, tickets, etc. on a smartphone, and taking and storing photos.
>>> CORRECT!

Second is fashion.
>>> The second is fashion.

It's because I feel better when I wear the style I'm attracted to every day and take pictures according to the concept.
>>> CORRECT!

Finally free.
>>> Finally is freedom.

This is because if there is no leisure, travel can become stressful because it is driven by purpose rather than pleasure.
>>> CORRECT!
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