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회원님의 영작문

Hello, T. Beth.
How was your weekend?
Since there was no special events, I took a rest at home after working.
These days, I've been depressed somewhat.
Maybe, that's because around 1 month have passed after my last trip to Singapore.
I think I can recharge with travel again.
I also have a concern about our clinic's revenue.
The profit of our clinic tends to go down slowly recently.
Actually, I don't care the profit day by day.
My colleague, Dr. MJ, is quite different from me though.
He is now very sensitive because of concern about money.
It made me nervous.
In addition, I heard about the conflicts among many staff.
It is too difficult for me to watch my staff leave our clinic after a fight.
Regarding the homework, I tend to regret many things in the past.
Fortunately, I forget the bad mood so quickly.
My brain might have modified some bad memories into good ones, and it happened involuntarily.
After regreting something, we can learn something from it.
How about you?
See you tomorrow.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Dr. Kim.
My weekend was pretty normal as well. I didn't do anything special. I just stayed home, did a lot of chores and spent time with my dog. My mother owns a gown shop where she rents out gowns for weddings. I spent my weekend washing used gowns. There were two bags of it to wash so it took me the whole Saturday doing it. I dried them all out on Sunday and put all of them in the bag. They are now ready to be sent back to the shop. 
I do have a lot of regrets in life as well. 

Hello, T. Beth.
>>> correct  
How was your weekend?
>>>  correct    
Since there was no special events, I took a rest at home after working.
>>>  correct    
These days, I've been depressed somewhat.
>>>  correct  
>>> OR: These days, I've been somewhat depressed. 
Maybe, that's because around 1 month have passed after my last trip to Singapore.
>>>  correct  
>>> OR: It's probably because a month has passed since I visited Singapore. 
I think I can recharge with travel again.
>>>   correct  
I also have a concern about our clinic's revenue.
>>>   correct  
The profit of our clinic tends to go down slowly recently.
>>>  correct   
Actually, I don't care the profit day by day.
>>>  Actually, I don't care about the profit on daily basis.
My colleague, Dr. MJ, is quite different from me though.
>>>   correct  
He is now very sensitive because of concern about money.
>>> correct    
It made me nervous.
>>>   correct  
In addition, I heard about the conflicts among many staffs.
>>>   correct  
It is too difficult for me to watch my staff leave our clinic after a fight.
>>>  correct   
Regarding the homework, I tend to regret many things in the past.
>>>   correct  
Fortunately, I forget the bad mood so quickly.
>>>   correct  
My brain might have modified some bad memories into good ones, and it happened involuntarily.
>>>   correct  
After regretting something, we can learn something from it.
>>>  correct   
>>> OR: Even though we regret something, there's something we can learn from it. 
How about you?
>>>    correct 
See you tomorrow.
>>>    correct 
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