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Impulsive shopping experience

작성자: 이*윤
2023-08-18 1978

회원님의 영작문

Have you ever had an impulsive shopping experience where you bought something unexpectedly? What did you feel afterward?

Originally, I have a shopping habit of thinking carefully and comparing to these and those.
But I had an impulsive shopping experience where I bought something unexpectedly.
I felt two different emotions from my experience.
I bought cosmetics on impulse because it looks good. It was pretty and used well. So I thought it was good thing that I bought it.
However, when I bought for my best friend's birthday present, I bought a cute little interior accessorys on impulse, but I didn't have space to put them and didn't need it. So I had a very embarrassing.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yun! Thanks for completing the homework as soon as possible. You're impressive. I assume you finished it early so you could enjoy your time with your family at the beach. Have a great time with your family. I look forward to hearing your stories when we meet again. 
~ T. Jade ^^

Have you ever had an impulsive shopping experience where you bought something unexpectedly? What did you feel afterward?
Originally, I have a shopping habit of thinking carefully and comparing to these and those.
>> Originally, I have a shopping habit of thinking carefully and comparing these and those.
But I had an impulsive shopping experience where I bought something unexpectedly.
>> Correct
I felt two different emotions from my experience.
>> Correct
I bought cosmetics on impulse because it looks good. 
>> I bought cosmetics on impulse because they looked good.
It was pretty and used well. 
>> Correct
>> OR: It was pretty and served its purpose well.
So I thought it was good thing that I bought it.
>> Correct
However, when I bought for my best friend's birthday present, I bought a cute little interior accessorys on impulse, but I didn't have space to put them and didn't need it.
>> However, when I bought a birthday present for my best friend, I bought cute little interior accessories on impulse, but I didn't have space to put them and didn't need them.
>> OR: However, when I bought a birthday present for my best friend, I impulsively purchased cute little interior accessories, but I didn't have space to put them and didn't need them.

So I had a very embarrassing.
>> So I had a very embarrassing moment.
>> So I was very embarrassed.
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