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What\'s a memory that makes you happy?

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I'm making happy memorys are frist is recallinng my excited memories.
And I go to travel and I go to fun place.
And also played fun things whith my sister.
And lastly I eated yummy food.
These are my memories makes me happy.

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Hi Henry!

See you tomorrow ^^

T. DON

I'm making happy memorys are frist is recallinng my excited memories.
And I go to travel and I go to fun place.
And also played fun things whith my sister.
And lastly I eated yummy food.
These are my memories makes me happy.

>> To make happy memories, I must recall my exciting memories first and that is to travel and go to fun place. Also do some fun things with my sister. And lastly is to eat yummy foods. These are the memories that makes me happy.
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