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What is one of the most exciting jobs you can think of? How about one of the most boring jobs?

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I think K-POP ideals are one of the most exciting jobs. They practice new songs everyday and film new music videos wearing fabulous clothes. Also, meeting with their fans would be extremely exciting work because fans always give huge love to them.
On the other hand, the most boring job is the accountant. They have to deal with complicated numbers every day. However, earning a lot of money would be an advantage of the job.

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Hey there, Yun Ju!

A job may be important for a sense of purpose since it can provide goals to work toward each day and an income to support you financially. It can help you build skills and experience that will last throughout your career, even if you change careers later in life.

- Kristine ^^ 

I think K-POP ideals are one of the most exciting jobs.
>> I believe one of the most exciting jobs is being a K-POP idol.
They practice new songs everyday and film new music videos wearing fabulous clothes.
>> They are constantly working on new songs, while wearing stylish attire when they shoot new music videos.
Also, meeting with their fans would be extremely exciting work because fans always give huge love to them.
>> Also, meeting their fans would also be a really fascinating task because they usually show a lot of support.
On the other hand, the most boring job is the accountant.
>> On the other hand, the most boring job is being an accountant.
They have to deal with complicated numbers every day.
>> Correct. 
However, earning a lot of money would be an advantage of the job.
>> A benefit of this position would be earning a lot of money.
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