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Why didn\'t you pursue nursing?

작성자: 이*윤
2023-08-17 1908

회원님의 영작문

Why didn't you pursue nursing?

Umm.....To be honest, I didn't get the score my to choose major as a nursing.
My scores were middle, but my scores should have been high to choose nursing.
Also, In Korea, high school students can go to college in two ways : how to evaluate my school life score before taking the national college entrance exam(the same test as SAT in the U.S) and through a test called the national college entrance exam.
I passed the document evaluation through the school life score, but I failed the interview.
I practiced a lot and went, but the interviewer didn't seem to believe me.
I kept failing the interview, so I got nervous and depressed. My self-esteem has also decreased a lot, so I chose the current major of computer engineering as an alternative major.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun. Thank you for sharing such an important part of your life. Talking about how we weren't able to pursue our dream major is a sensitive topic. I'm sorry for not thinking about it before I gave you the homework. Still, I appreciate you sharing and answering this question. I am honored to know a big part of your life. I can empathize with you. Also, I know you are happy with your chosen field of study, so I guess we'll have to just look forward to the great things we could achieve with our major. Thanks again for this! I'm excited to talk with you again in our class. See you!
~ T. Jade ^^
Why didn't you pursue nursing?
Umm.....To be honest, I didn't get the score my to choose major as a nursing.
>> To be honest, I didn't get the score to choose nursing as my major.
My scores were middle, but my scores should have been high to choose nursing.
>> My scores were average, but they should have been high for me to pursue nursing.
Also, In Korea, high school students can go to college in two ways : how to evaluate my school life score before taking the national college entrance exam(the same test as SAT in the U.S) and through a test called the national college entrance exam.
>>In Korea, high school students can go to college in two ways: by having their school life scores evaluated before taking the national college entrance exam (similar to the SAT in the U.S.), or by taking the national college entrance exam itself.
I passed the document evaluation through the school life score, but I failed the interview.
>> Correct
I practiced a lot and went, but the interviewer didn't seem to believe me.
>> Correct
I kept failing the interview, so I got nervous and depressed. 
>> Correct
My self-esteem has also decreased a lot, so I chose the current major of computer engineering as an alternative major.
>> Correct
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