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More civil servants should resign voluntarily.

The civil servants are symbols og indolence and incompetence in Korean society.

One of the worst faults of last government was that they let increased recklessly the number of civil servants.

The phenomen of now is very natual and result.

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Hello Ms. Lily!
Your answers today really caught my attention. I am blown away! Thank you for this. have a good day!
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More civil servants should resign voluntarily.
>>> CORRECT!

The civil servants are symbols og indolence and incompetence in Korean society.
>>> Civil servants are symbols of indolence and incompetence in Korean society.

One of the worst faults of last government was that they let increased recklessly the number of civil servants.
>>>  One of the worst faults of the last government was that they let increased recklessly the number of civil servants.

The phenomen of now is very natual and result.
>>> The phenomenon of now is just a natural result.
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