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Would you rather have a dog or cat?

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2023-08-15 1870

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I would rather have a dog because I think dogs are smarter than cats so dogs could have some kinds of skills such as an errand, playing with people. In my opinion, doge are cuter than cats and they have a smiling face, and their ears also look cute. Most of all, dogs can protect a house from thieves and robbers. I think dogs are very clever, nice and friendly. I want to keep a cute dog that can be a friend with me someday.

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Hi Scott!

Great answers! Keep it up!

T. DON

I would rather have a dog because I think dogs are smarter than cats so dogs could have some kinds of skills such as an errand, playing with people. In my opinion, doge are cuter than cats and they have a smiling face, and their ears also look cute. Most of all, dogs can protect a house from thieves and robbers. I think dogs are very clever, nice and friendly. I want to keep a cute dog that can be a friend with me someday.

>> I would rather have a dog because I think dogs are smarter than cats so dogs could have some kinds of skills such as an errand, playing with people. In my opinion, dogs are cuter than cats and they have a smiling face, and their ears also look cute. Most of all, dogs can protect a house from thieves and robbers. I think dogs are very clever, nice and friendly. I want to keep a cute dog that can be a friend with me someday.
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