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The best way to overcome heartbreaking is to live ordinary day. Do my work, exercise and study.

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Hi, Thomas!

Since it is not your first heartbreak, you know too well how to overcome your grief and sorrow. Just occupy your time with activities that can build yourself until you are finally ready to love again.

Study carefully your first sentence. Great job!

See you!

-T. Donna~

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