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How did you hear about this position?

- A month ago, I heard from a colleage friend about the job opening at your company.
Afterwards, I found out the correct information on the job site about the job opening. I immediately submitted my resume and qualifications to your company. I thought it was an opportunity that I couldn't just pass up. Because I've been hoping to join your company for a long time. I was more than excited to see that this job position had become available.
I am happy to imagine myself working at your company. That's why I hope I can work at your company.

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Good evening, Yun. This is impressive! Your answer is on point. This is certainly the perfect answer when the interviewer asks you this question. Great job, Yun! Thanks for answering this, and see you in our class!
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How did you hear about this position?
A month ago, I heard from a colleage friend about the job opening at your company.
>> A month ago, I heard from a colleague about the job opening at your company. 
Afterwards, I found out the correct information on the job site about the job opening. 
>> Afterwards, I found the correct information on the job site about the job opening.
>> OR: Afterwards, I found the correct information about the job opening on the company's website.
I immediately submitted my resume and qualifications to your company. 
>> Correct
I thought it was an opportunity that I couldn't just pass up. 
>> Correct
Because I've been hoping to join your company for a long time.
>> I've been hoping to join your company for a long time. 
I was more than excited to see that this job position had become available.
>> Correct
I am happy to imagine myself working at your company.
>> Correct
>> OR: I can envision myself working at your company.
That's why I hope I can work at your company.
>> Correct
>> OR: That's why I am eager to become a part of your team.
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