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Hello, T. Beth.
How was your weekend?
I wonder what you usually do on weekend.
As you know that, I worked in the clinic this weekend as usual.
There was nothing special in the clinic.
Meanwhile, I invited my friend's family yesterday.
He is one of my closeast friend.
He has a lovely baby who is now only two years old.
My wife and I prepared raw fish and pork.
We had a blast after a long time.
My friend and I drank too much whiskey.
That's why I am so tired now.
I hope I won't have a hangover in the morning.
As for my homework, there will be many changes about technology in the future.
About my work, many AI program will replace doctors.
Instead of many devices, some kind of simple device will be developed and it will make many people can diagnose and treat their body.
In addition, some kind of ointment will replace many treatment and make-up for our face.
Furthermore, magnetic auto car will drive by itself.
Many foods will be replaced by artificial ingredients.
See you in the morning.

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Thank you for this Dr. Kim. My weekend is mostly dedicated with doing chores such as laundry and cleaning. There's always chores to do. I also spend time with my dog. I am raising a Pomeranian. She is like my child. I bathe her, feed her and take her out for a walk.

Hello, T. Beth.
>>>  correct 
How was your weekend?
>>>  correct   
I wonder what you usually do on weekend.
>>>  correct   
As you know that, I worked in the clinic this weekend as usual.
>>>  As you already know, I worked in the clinic this weekend as usual. 
There was nothing special in the clinic.
>>>  correct   
Meanwhile, I invited my friend's family yesterday.
>>> correct    
He is one of my closest friend.
>>>   correct  
He has a lovely baby who is now only two years old.
>>>  correct   
My wife and I prepared raw fish and pork.
>>>  correct   
We had a blast after a long time.
>>> correct    
My friend and I drank too much whiskey.
>>>   correct  
That's why I am so tired now.
>>> correct    
I hope I won't have a hangover in the morning.
>>>  correct   
As for my homework, there will be many changes about technology in the future.
>>> correct  
>>> OR:   As for my homework, there will be many changes with technology in the future.
About my work, many AI program will replace doctors.
>>> About my work, many AI programs will replace doctors.  
Instead of many devices, some kind of simple device will be developed and it will make many people can diagnose and treat their body.
>>> Instead of many devices, some kind of simple devices will be developed and it will make many people be able to  diagnose and treat their body.
>>> OR:  Instead of many devices, some kind of simple devices will be developed and it will allow people to make self-diagnosis and self-treatment.
In addition, some kind of ointment will replace many treatment and make-up for our face.
>>>  correct   
Furthermore, magnetic auto car will drive by itself.
>>>  correct   
Many foods will be replaced by artificial ingredients.
>>>   correct     
See you in the morning.
>>>    correct    
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