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The first thing that comes to mind is the illegal discharge of wastewater.

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The first thing that comes to mind is the illegal discharge of wastewater.
And now I remember Japan is going to discharge wastewater this year.
I don't know why them allow it. But what can I say about what they say is possible.
I just hope for a lot of pain and longevity for those who have given me permission and those who want to get permission.

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Hello Da Hye,

I read your thoughtful insights on illegal wastewater discharge. Your concern for the environment is commendable. It's disheartening to learn about Japan's plans. By expressing your thoughts in English, you're not only engaging with global issues but also enhancing your language skills. Keep up the great work! 

~Teacher Cathy

 

The first thing that comes to mind is the illegal discharge of wastewater.

>>CORRECT

OR>>The initial thought that arises is the illicit release of wastewater.

And now I remember Japan is going to discharge wastewater this year.

>>CORRECT

OR>>And now I recall that Japan is planning to discharge wastewater this year.

I don't know why them allow it.

>>I don¡¯t know why they allow it.

But what can I say about what they say is possible.

>>But what can I say about what they believe can be done?

I just hope for a lot of pain and longevity for those who have given me permission and those who want to get permission.

>>I can only hope for lessons to be learned and for long-term well-being for both those who have granted permission and those seeking it. 

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