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Homework : Which part of your apartment do you not like most?

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My apartment is too noisy at night because main road near apartment stretch straight so is good for riding motorcycle which make loud noise. Also it is noisy because there are so many bars and drunken people scream. Another thing that i don't prefer my apartment is located far from seoul so i takes time to get to Seoul by public transportation.

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Hi there again, In Ae!
Thank you for sharing this with me. You know, every neighborhood has its down side. I just hope that you can study well or sleep well despite the noise.
See you next week.
T. Aki~

My apartment is too noisy at night because main road near apartment stretch straight so is good for riding motorcycle which make loud noise. 
>>>  My apartment is too noisy at night because the main road near the apartment stretch straight so is good for riding a motorcycle which makes loud noise.
>>> My apartment is too noisy at night because some people who like motorcycles enjoy riding on the straight stretch of the road near my apartment.

Also it is noisy because there are so many bars and drunken people scream. 
>>> Also it is noisy because there are so many bars and drunk people screaming. 


Another thing that i don't prefer my apartment is located far from seoul so i takes time to get to Seoul by public transportation.
>>> Another thing that I don't prefer, my apartment is located far from Seoul so it takes time to get to Seoul by public transportation.
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