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Homework

작성자: 주*연
2023-08-10 3576

회원님의 영작문

Make sentences using the following words:

Therapeutic (adj.) - healing
Toxin (noun) - poison
Mingle (verb) - to associate with others
Entrust (verb) - to assign a task or responsibility
Prioritize (verb) - to treat something as more important
compared to others

-> In previous my workplace, one of the job of charge staff was to assign the patient and to entrust some tasks to each of incoming nurses. The charge must have prioritize and judge in which nurse can take care of a tough patient, like this.. But I used to compare to other workers about tasks assigned. Because, some charge staff tend to play favorites. If some staff get on the wrong side of the charge, they can get garder with a lot of tasks and terrible patients. It\'s easy to make some authority can working like a toxin to all staffs. It\'s not a therapeutic relationship for sure.

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Hello!


Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it’s 

done! So have faith you’ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!


Regards,

Teacher Lexie



In previous my workplace, one of the job of charge staff was to assign the patient and to entrust some tasks to each of incoming nurses.
>> In my previous workplace, one of the jobs of the officer-in-charge was to assign tasks for the patient to each nurse on duty.
The charge must have prioritize and judge in which nurse can take care of a tough patient, like this.
>> The officer-in-charge must prioritize and decide which nurse can take care of tough patients.
But I used to compare to other workers about tasks assigned. Because, some charge staff tend to play favorites.
>> But I used to be compared to other workers because the officer-in-charge tended to play favorites.
If some staff get on the wrong side of the charge, they can get garder with a lot of tasks and terrible patients.
>> If a staff got on the wrong side of the officer-in-charge, they would be assigned to terrible patients and have lots of tasks.
It's easy to make some authority can working like a toxin to all staffs.
>> It's easy to establish authority which is toxic to all the staff.
It's not a therapeutic relationship for sure.
>> GOOD!
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