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Because of Using plastic, many electric products, their own cars.
We should face the facts our problems.
We already be experiencing irregular weather conditions and strange scorching temperatures.

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nvironment Pollution rising up these days after occurring COVID.

>>Environmental pollution is rising these days due to the occurrence of COVID.
Environment groups be criticizing that we use too many coals as we lives now.

>>Environmental groups are criticizing the excessive use of coal in our current lifestyles.
Because of Using plastic, many electric products, their own cars.

>>Many electronic products and their own cars are being used, leading to the usage of plastic.
We should face the facts our problems.

>>We should confront the realities of our problems.
We already be experiencing irregular weather conditions and strange scorching temperatures

>>We are already experiencing irregular weather conditions and unusual scorching temperatures.

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