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HOMEWORK for 08/09
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Aside from English, what other languages would you like to learn in your free time?

I want chinese and japanese very well because if I can speak chinese well I can conversation with a lot of people and japanese is just I like japan

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Hi there, Min Seog! You did great in answering this question clearly. Let's make sure to keep on doing activities that will help you make more sensible sentences next time. See you in class! ~ T. Marie ^^
I want chinese and japanese very well because if I can speak chinese well I can conversation with a lot of people and japanese is just I like japan.
>> I want to learn Chinese and Japanese very well.
>> If I can speak Chinese, I can have conversation with a lot of people.
>> I want to speak Japanese just because I like Japan. 
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