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Have you ever worked somewhere that had bad employment conditions?

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I don¡¯t worked bad employment conditions.
But I chose one of my work experiences, l work filming the internet lectures now. they are given money and taken back again. And once, they who hired me delayed giving my pay while i take their job a month.
It is really bad from employees like me.

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Hello Su,

Thank you for submitting your homework. I appreciate your efforts in completing the assignment. I read your description of your work experiences, particularly the challenges you faced with employment conditions and delayed payment. It's unfortunate to hear about such situations, and it's essential for employees to be treated fairly and compensated promptly for their hard work. Remember, your experiences contribute to your growth and understanding of different work environments. Keep up the good work and stay determined in your studies!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I don¡¯t worked bad employment conditions.

>>I don¡¯t work in bad employment conditions.

But I chose one of my work experiences, l work filming the internet lectures now.

>>But I selected one of my previous work experiences. I currently work filming the internet lectures now.

they are given money and taken back again.

>>They give money and take it back again.

And once, they who hired me delayed giving my pay while i take their job a month.

>>Once, the people who hired me delayed giving my payment while I was doing my job for a month.

It is really bad from employees like me.

>>It is really bad for employees like me.

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