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Q.1: Do you enjoy doing your hobbies alone or friends/family?
A.1: I enjoy doing my hobbies with my friends.
I'm not prefer doing my hobbies alone because I have a outgoing personality.
Also I like to be able to share my thoughts while I'm doing my hobbies.

Q.2: Are there any specific hobbies you've been passionate about since childhood?
A.2: Yes. I have a specific hobbies since child hood. It is watching dramas.
The reason why I like to watch drama is that I can easily access culture, thoughts, opinion of other countries indirectly and It is very fun!

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Hi, Arthur! I see that you love doing things that involve your family. I can presume based on your answer and from our previous class that you are a family-oriented man. That's lovely. Thanks for this. I look forward to seeing you again in class!
- Teacher Jade^^

1. Do you enjoy doing your hobbies alone or with friends or family?
I enjoy doing my hobbies with my friends.
>> Correct
I'm not prefer doing my hobbies alone because I have a outgoing personality.
>> I don't prefer doing my hobbies alone because I have an outgoing personality.
Also I like to be able to share my thoughts while I'm doing my hobbies.
>> Also, I like to be able to share my thoughts while I'm doing my hobbies.
2. Are there any specific hobbies you've been passionate about since childhood?
Yes.
>> Correct
I have a specific hobbies since child hood. 
>> I have had specific hobbies since childhood.
It is watching dramas.
>> Correct
The reason why I like to watch drama is that I can easily access culture, thoughts, opinion of other countries indirectly and It is very fun!
>> The reason why I like to watch drama is that I can easily access the culture, thoughts, and opinions of other countries indirectly, and it is very fun!
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