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Q. How is a mistake different from an error?
To be honest, I've been confused this question for long time.
Because, some people say that 'mistake'is a broader word, while others say that 'error' is broader. it's hard to verify.
I think that mistake occur cased by careless or lack of knowledge accidentelly.
Sometimes mistake is judged by my own criteria. for example, I wanted to cook the pizza, but I forgot to put on the pineapple that I wanted to add.
Otherwise, error should be considered with some rules or regulations. for example, pizza made overcooked because of malfunction of the oven or wrong calcuation of time by cooker, and so on.

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Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



Regards,

Teacher Lexie




Q: How is a mistake different from an error?
To be honest, I've been confused this question for long time.
>> To be honest, I've been confused about this question for a long time.
Because some people say that 'mistake' is a broader word, while others say that 'error' is broader. It's hard to verify.
>> CORRECT!
I think that mistake occur cased by careless or lack of knowledge accidentelly.
>> I think a mistake occurs in the case of careless or accidental action and is usually caused by a lack of knowledge about something.
Sometimes mistake is judged by my own criteria.
>> Sometimes, I judge a mistake according to my own criteria.
for example, I wanted to cook the pizza, but I forgot to put on the pineapple that I wanted to add.
>> For example, I wanted to cook pizza but I forgot to put some pineapple that I wanted to add.
Otherwise, error should be considered with some rules or regulations.
>> On the other hand, an error should be considered with some rules or regulations.
 for example, pizza made overcooked because of malfunction of the oven or wrong calcuation of time by cooker, and so on.
>> For example, a pizza was overcooked because of an oven malfunction or miscalculation of time by the cook, etc.
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