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When I was a teenager, I used to visit a video game place near my school
After school, I often went there with my friends.
One day, I skipped school to enjoy the games at the place but I got in trouble.
I was caught by my mother and she scolded me.
Now I am missing those days.

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Hello Seung Ki! We all have that kind of experience when we were young. We always wanted to do things our way. Of course, part of our childhood is being disciplined and scolded by our parents. I feel happy whenever I recall my childhood memories. If only I could turn back time.~ T. Lyn
When I was a teenager, I used to visit a video game place near my school
>>When I was a teenager, I used to visit an arcade or video game parlor near my school.
After school, I often went there with my friends.
>>After school, my friends and I often went there.
One day, I skipped school to enjoy the games at the place but I got in trouble.
>>One day, I skipped school in order to playe games there and got into trouble.
I was caught by my mother and she scolded me.
>>Correct.
Now I am missing those days.
>>Correct. or I miss those days.
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