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When I was in my 20s, I was in charge of explaining the card issuance and limit to customers who applied for a department store card issuance at a department store. At that time, there were customers who were dissatisfied and angry when they informed customers who had difficulty issuing cards due to credit problems, but they were taught not to be angry together. However, I also got angry with customers who were too unpleasant, and I even chased them to the department store. Of course, the system wasn't as good as it is now, so they couldn't find us.

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Good day, Eliana!
It's nice to remember the things we used to do, it sometimes makes us a better person.
Thank you for this.
Have a great day!
Aki~

When I was in my 20s, I was in charge of explaining the card issuance and limit to customers who applied for a department store card issuance at a department store.
>>> CORRECT!

 At that time, there were customers who were dissatisfied and angry when they informed customers who had difficulty issuing cards due to credit problems, but they were taught not to be angry together. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, I also got angry with customers who were too unpleasant, and I even chased them to the department store. 
>>> CORRECT!

Of course, the system wasn't as good as it is now, so they couldn't find us.
>>> CORRECT!
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