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My family likes do badminton in outdoor. We do often it to camping and daily life. And I like watch movies with my friends.

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Good evening, Rick!^^

Indoor activities take place inside a building.
They are constrained, among other things, by the surroundings of the venue where they take place and the number of participants in the events.
An outside area is used for outdoor activities.
It could be a green area on a home or being close to nature.

Take note, it's better to do indoor activities when it is very hot outside.^^

Thank you for answering your homework.
Have a good night!

__T. Mayleen :)


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We do often it to camping and daily life.
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And I like watch movies with my friends.
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