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HOMEWORK for 08/07
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What do you think is the most difficult part in learning a language? Why do you think so?

most difficult part in language is change the language that my think in my head korean to english.
I¡®m also not good other parts but if I have enough time I can but changing to english from korean is very difficult

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Good morning, Min Seog. Thank you for sharing this idea in today's homework. Let's keep on doing more activities that will help you enhance your abilities even better. See you in class! ~ T. Marie ^^
most difficult part in language is change the language that my think in my head korean to english.
>> The most difficult part in learning a language is changing my thoughts from Korean to English in my head. 
I¡®m also not good other parts but if I have enough time I can but changing to english from korean is very difficult
>> I'm also not good at other parts but I can do it with enough time. 
>> But really, changing from Korean to English is very difficult. 
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