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What kind of love is the best love?

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I think the best love is knowing love each other. people think love is given and taken.
But that is not working on the relationship.
Sometimes, some people want just love without question.
some people¡¯s the love ruin their love and relationship.
I think that is not love. Maybe just they want attention for them.
So Love is difficult.

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Hello Su,

I'm truly impressed by the effort you put into your homework! Your thoughts about love are both profound and thoughtful. You've beautifully explained how real love involves understanding and caring for each other, and not just giving or taking. It's wonderful to see you reflecting on these important aspects of relationships. Keep up the fantastic work, and continue sharing your insightful ideas!

~Teacher Cathy

 

I think the best love is knowing love each other.

>>I think the best kind of love is knowing and understanding each other.

people think love is given and taken.

>>People believe that love is about giving and taking.

OR>>People often perceive love as a give-and-take process.

But that is not working on the relationship.

>>But that doesn't work well in a relationship.

OR>> However, that approach may not be effective in a relationship.

Sometimes, some people want just love without question.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Sometimes, certain people simply desire love without any doubts or questions.

some people¡¯s the love ruin their love and relationship.

>> Some people let their love ruin their relationships.

I think that is not love.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I don't consider that to be genuine love.

Maybe just they want attention for them.

>>Maybe they just want attention for themselves.

OR>>It might be that they are seeking attention for themselves.

So Love is difficult.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Therefore, love can be complicated.

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