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The best thing in the beach

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2023-08-07 2024

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The sounds of the wave were the best thing in the beach. It made me feel calm down and peace.
And I catched a fish without any tools. The fish must be sick. I took the picture with that fish.

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Hello, Thomas!

As I said, the beach will remain beautiful in spite of what happened over the weekend.

Congratulations for getting almost all of your sentences correctly. Take note that the past tense of 'catch' is 'caught'. In addition, the use of 'a' and 'the' can be confusing but 'a' is for less specific and 'the' is specific. You did an excellent job!

See you!

-T. Donna~

The sounds of the wave were the best thing in the beach. 
>> Correct!

It made me feel calm down and peace.
>> Correct!
Or: It made me feel calm down and gave me peace.

And I catched a fish without any tools. 
>> And, I caught a fish without any tool.

The fish must be sick. 
>> Correct!

I took the picture with that fish.
>> I took a picture with that fish.
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