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7.21.Fri

작성자: 황*민
2023-08-07 1179

회원님의 영작문

1. I finished my work. I went out for a walk.
-> Finishing my work, I went out for a walk.
2. The monkey sat on a branch. He gibbered.
-> The monkey sitting on a branch gibbered.
3. The road is blocked. We have to take a different route.
-> The road being blocked, we have to take a different route.
4. The weather is fine. So we went out for a walk.
-> The weather being fine, we went out for a walk.
5. The old man was not able to walk. So he sat down for a while.
-> The old man being not able to walk sat down for a while.
6. She is very rich. She can buy just about anything she wants.
-> Very rich, she can buy just about anything she wants.
7. The driver saw the signal. He stopped the car.
-> The driver seeing the signal stopped the car.
8. The thief saw the policeman. He ran away.
-> The thief seeing the policeman ran away.
9. -> Hearing a loud noise, he looked around.
10. -> Hearing the bell, the students rushed to their classes.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Hyeon Min,


We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.

I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.

T. Jeny


1. I finished my work. I went out for a walk.
-> Finishing my work, I went out for a walk.
>>Having finished my work, I went out for a walk.
2. The monkey sat on a branch. He gibbered.
-> The monkey sitting on a branch gibbered.
>>Sitting on a branch, the monkey gibbered.
3. The road is blocked. We have to take a different route.
-> The road being blocked, we have to take a different route.
>>The road being blocked, we had to take a different route.
4. The weather is fine. So we went out for a walk.
-> The weather being fine, we went out for a walk.
>>correct
5. The old man was not able to walk. So he sat down for a while.
-> The old man being not able to walk sat down for a while.
>> Being unable to walk, the old man sat down for a while.
6. She is very rich. She can buy just about anything she wants.
-> Very rich, she can buy just about anything she wants.
>>Being rich, she can buy just about anything she wants.
7. The driver saw the signal. He stopped the car.
-> The driver seeing the signal stopped the car.
>>Seeing the signal, the driver stopped the car.
8. The thief saw the policeman. He ran away.
-> The thief seeing the policeman ran away.
>>Seeing the policeman, the thief ran away.
9. -> Hearing a loud noise, he looked around.
>>correct
10. -> Hearing the bell, the students rushed to their classes.
>>correct
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