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In the past, I would have immediately tried to help or reported it. However, in a world that has become too scary, I don't know what kind of danger will happen to me or my family, so I will report it, but I don't think I can give direct help.

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Good morning, Eliana!
I think I would have to agree with you that these days it's difficult to intervene in some matters. So most of the time, we tend to ignore and let someone  bolder handle the matter.
Have a good day!
Aki~


In the past, I would have immediately tried to help or reported it.
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However, in a world that has become too scary, I don't know what kind of danger will happen to me or my family, so I will report it, but I don't think I can give direct help.
>> CORRECT!

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